Post by sion on Oct 28, 2005 4:51:25 GMT -5
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This is my story[/glow]
[glow=red,2,300]Prologue[/glow]
[glow=red,2,300]The beggining of time[/glow]
When anclestaire was young there were six guardian spirits who protected the land, Ranna (sleeper) ,mosrael (waker),kibeth (walker), Dyrim (Talker), Sareneth (Binder) and astrael (Banisher).
They watched the worlds early days before the time of humans.
When the battle between the elves and dragons was at its fierceist the guardians lent a hand. Mosrael and Dyrim spun there power together to create a [glow=red,2,300]"Gedwey ignasia"[/glow] (Mind link) between all dragons and all elves, allowing them to link together and create a rider. The diferance in the speices was so large that the 2 guardians did not know what they were doing and lost their lives to the cause.
Because of this all elves now have a natural strength from the dragons.It was around that time that humans came into the world .From that point onwards there were many riders as dragons could now join with any one the wished, although the riders were always human or elf, never seeming to be dwarf.. The riders soon stood over the land as the new guardians of peace, and men tried to rid the world of the remaning gods. Ranna,kibeth,sareneth and astrael.
These gods were threatened by the amount of power bestowed in the riders and as time went on the gods found it imposible to carry on. So they sealed there power within four spelled items.
[glow=red,2,300]The Traitor (prologue part 2)[/glow]
When the riders heard this they attacked trojenheim (the place of the gods) but to no avail.
Trojenheim was protected by the power in the artifacts. Armys for all around the world tried to invade as all of them wanted the gods power. Even the gods themselves were tempted to take the artifacts. Ranna was the lowest of all the gods, and had never had any real power. She took the artifacts and ran from trojenheim. Because of this the other gods were slaughtered by mortals.
[glow=red,2,300]Rannas binding (Part 3)[/glow]
When Ranna heard this she was overcome by guilt, she knew the riders would come after her too so she locked the other gods artifacts away in a world that was neither death nor life. Ranna could use her artifact to unlock them, a final fail safe before ranna locked her artifact away, and the gods power was gone forever.
The riders had arrived faster than Ranna had thought, He was slain 3 days after the other gods were.
For centurys after men,elves and dwarves fought for control of Rannas power. None of them could unlock the other artifacts though. Eventually the dagger fell into the hands of a rider called Galbotorix.He used the power to create and rule over and empire, in a way inslaving the people.
[glow=red,2,300]The last rider[/glow]
Galbatorix killed all the dragon riders, there were only 3 eggs left and he guarded them for his sons to take.
There was one rider who was still alive, but his dragon was not. He managed to fight his way in and get one of the eggs. This was given to a young elf to transport. The mans name was brom, and he was the leader of a rebelion called varden, he gave up his leadership to go and find the last dragon rider.
[glow=red,2,300]Morzan[/glow]
Brom was betrayed by his best friend jeod, Jeod took the egg for himself planning to sell it back to the empire but morzan found him first. Morzan was the dragon rider who had helped galbotrox gain control of anclasteirre. Morzan slaughtered Jeod and was returning to galbatroix with the egg, Brom got to Morzan first and an epic battle began. Brom came out on top and killed Morzan. With his last breath Morzan tried to teleport the egg to galabotrox, but the spell was compleltly messed up and the egg came up somewhere completely differant.
[glow=red,2,300]Eragon[/glow]
A young boy called Eragon found the egg, and the dragon hatched for him. He named the dragon saphira.
About a year later Eragons father was killed by the empire, eragon left to seek revenge. Eragon meets brom who trains him in both magic and swordsmanship. Just before Brom dies at the hands of the empire he tell eragon that his real father is not the man who died.
[glow=red,2,300]Murtagh[/glow]
Along the way eragon meets murtagh who saves his life multiple times. When Eragon joins the varden Murtagh tells him that his father is Morzan. So Murtagh leaves eragon saying that the varden would never accept the son of morzan. Eragon saves the varden from a urgal attack and is sent to train with the elves.
[glow=red,2,300]How it was supposed to be..[/glow]
Eragon is wounded on the way, he becomes cripled and unable to fight. When he arrives at the Du Weldenharden he is barely alive. The elves do what they can and turn him into a denzien, a half elf.
[glow=red,2,300]Brother[/glow]
Eragon fights against the empire. Just when it looks like victory a rider on a red dragon arrives and defeats eragon. The rider takes his helmet of revealing himself to be murtagh, he also tells eragon they are brothers and there father is morzan. The man who killed Eragons adopted dad.
[glow=red,2,300]Final battle[/glow]
Eragon fought galbotrox a week later. It was a tough battle but Eragon just managed to win it. He took the dagger as his own and returned to the elves. There he met a beautiful woman, who he married later on. They had two children. One of them was called [glow=red,2,300]Sion[/glow]
[glow=red,2,300]To be continued..[/glow]
Disclamier: Although i have used names from other places and various books i have not copied the story, it is of my own creation.
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[/glow]
This is my story[/glow]
[glow=red,2,300]Prologue[/glow]
[glow=red,2,300]The beggining of time[/glow]
When anclestaire was young there were six guardian spirits who protected the land, Ranna (sleeper) ,mosrael (waker),kibeth (walker), Dyrim (Talker), Sareneth (Binder) and astrael (Banisher).
They watched the worlds early days before the time of humans.
When the battle between the elves and dragons was at its fierceist the guardians lent a hand. Mosrael and Dyrim spun there power together to create a [glow=red,2,300]"Gedwey ignasia"[/glow] (Mind link) between all dragons and all elves, allowing them to link together and create a rider. The diferance in the speices was so large that the 2 guardians did not know what they were doing and lost their lives to the cause.
Because of this all elves now have a natural strength from the dragons.It was around that time that humans came into the world .From that point onwards there were many riders as dragons could now join with any one the wished, although the riders were always human or elf, never seeming to be dwarf.. The riders soon stood over the land as the new guardians of peace, and men tried to rid the world of the remaning gods. Ranna,kibeth,sareneth and astrael.
These gods were threatened by the amount of power bestowed in the riders and as time went on the gods found it imposible to carry on. So they sealed there power within four spelled items.
[glow=red,2,300]The Traitor (prologue part 2)[/glow]
When the riders heard this they attacked trojenheim (the place of the gods) but to no avail.
Trojenheim was protected by the power in the artifacts. Armys for all around the world tried to invade as all of them wanted the gods power. Even the gods themselves were tempted to take the artifacts. Ranna was the lowest of all the gods, and had never had any real power. She took the artifacts and ran from trojenheim. Because of this the other gods were slaughtered by mortals.
[glow=red,2,300]Rannas binding (Part 3)[/glow]
When Ranna heard this she was overcome by guilt, she knew the riders would come after her too so she locked the other gods artifacts away in a world that was neither death nor life. Ranna could use her artifact to unlock them, a final fail safe before ranna locked her artifact away, and the gods power was gone forever.
The riders had arrived faster than Ranna had thought, He was slain 3 days after the other gods were.
For centurys after men,elves and dwarves fought for control of Rannas power. None of them could unlock the other artifacts though. Eventually the dagger fell into the hands of a rider called Galbotorix.He used the power to create and rule over and empire, in a way inslaving the people.
[glow=red,2,300]The last rider[/glow]
Galbatorix killed all the dragon riders, there were only 3 eggs left and he guarded them for his sons to take.
There was one rider who was still alive, but his dragon was not. He managed to fight his way in and get one of the eggs. This was given to a young elf to transport. The mans name was brom, and he was the leader of a rebelion called varden, he gave up his leadership to go and find the last dragon rider.
[glow=red,2,300]Morzan[/glow]
Brom was betrayed by his best friend jeod, Jeod took the egg for himself planning to sell it back to the empire but morzan found him first. Morzan was the dragon rider who had helped galbotrox gain control of anclasteirre. Morzan slaughtered Jeod and was returning to galbatroix with the egg, Brom got to Morzan first and an epic battle began. Brom came out on top and killed Morzan. With his last breath Morzan tried to teleport the egg to galabotrox, but the spell was compleltly messed up and the egg came up somewhere completely differant.
[glow=red,2,300]Eragon[/glow]
A young boy called Eragon found the egg, and the dragon hatched for him. He named the dragon saphira.
About a year later Eragons father was killed by the empire, eragon left to seek revenge. Eragon meets brom who trains him in both magic and swordsmanship. Just before Brom dies at the hands of the empire he tell eragon that his real father is not the man who died.
[glow=red,2,300]Murtagh[/glow]
Along the way eragon meets murtagh who saves his life multiple times. When Eragon joins the varden Murtagh tells him that his father is Morzan. So Murtagh leaves eragon saying that the varden would never accept the son of morzan. Eragon saves the varden from a urgal attack and is sent to train with the elves.
[glow=red,2,300]How it was supposed to be..[/glow]
Eragon is wounded on the way, he becomes cripled and unable to fight. When he arrives at the Du Weldenharden he is barely alive. The elves do what they can and turn him into a denzien, a half elf.
[glow=red,2,300]Brother[/glow]
Eragon fights against the empire. Just when it looks like victory a rider on a red dragon arrives and defeats eragon. The rider takes his helmet of revealing himself to be murtagh, he also tells eragon they are brothers and there father is morzan. The man who killed Eragons adopted dad.
[glow=red,2,300]Final battle[/glow]
Eragon fought galbotrox a week later. It was a tough battle but Eragon just managed to win it. He took the dagger as his own and returned to the elves. There he met a beautiful woman, who he married later on. They had two children. One of them was called [glow=red,2,300]Sion[/glow]
[glow=red,2,300]To be continued..[/glow]
Disclamier: Although i have used names from other places and various books i have not copied the story, it is of my own creation.
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